I can say pretty definitively that these stories are really not my jam – the story is extremely decompressed, which makes it obvious that this is an animation pitch. Having said that, the motion of the characters is really well conveyed throughout. This page is a great example of both, specifically the middle tier of panels.

(Heavy Metal issue #190, November 2000 – Page 40 The Keepers of the Maser 4 – The Iron Tower by Frezzato)